Bradley this is a MERIT standard piece of work, however to get a distinction i want to to tell me a little more. Rather than just writing a hazard is "Falling". Tell me why it is a hazard i.e. "falling is a hazard because you could either hurt yourself by hitting the floor or landing on someone else causing a neck or head injury". Make the changes and i'll change the grade.
Bradley this is a MERIT standard piece of work, however to get a distinction i want to to tell me a little more. Rather than just writing a hazard is "Falling". Tell me why it is a hazard i.e. "falling is a hazard because you could either hurt yourself by hitting the floor or landing on someone else causing a neck or head injury". Make the changes and i'll change the grade.
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